Bunch of grammar fixes and improvements by KORN Andras

[grml.org.git] / copyright / index.php

diff --git a/copyright/index.php b/copyright/index.php
index 6c81b4d..0454a10 100644 (file)
--- a/copyright/index.php
+++ b/copyright/index.php
@@ -34,17 +34,21 @@
             href="http://www.gnu.org/copyleft/gpl.html">the GNU General
             Public License</a>. Debian packages of the grml software are
             available in the <a
-            href="http://deb.grml.org/">grml-repository</a>, sources are
+            href="http://deb.grml.org/">grml repository</a>; sources are
             available at <a
-            href="http://sources.grml.org/">sources.grml.org</a>.</p>
+            href="http://sources.grml.org/">http://sources.grml.org/</a>.</p>
 
-            <p>If not otherwise specified, the software on the ISO falls under
+            <p>If not otherwise specified, the software packaged as grml and published in the form of ISO images falls under
             <a href="http://www.gnu.org/copyleft/gpl.html">the GNU General Public
             License</a>. Take a look at /usr/share/doc/$PACKAGE/copyright for
-            more details.</p>
+            the specific license terms of each shipped package.</p>
 
             <p>You can copy, modify, redistribute and even resell the CD without
-            restrictions, as long as the recipient receives the same license.</p>
+            restrictions, as long as you license it to your customers under the same license.
+            (Note: this is just a summary of the terms of the GPL; always read the
+            <a href="http://www.gnu.org/copyleft/gpl.html">full text</a> of the license
+            and preferably consult a lawyer if you have any doubt whether what you want to
+            do is permitted by the GPL.)</p>
 
             <h2>Impressum</h2>