Bunch of grammar fixes and improvements by KORN Andras

[grml.org.git] / config / index.php

diff --git a/config/index.php b/config/index.php
index 0532da3..0c2784b 100644 (file)
--- a/config/index.php
+++ b/config/index.php
@@ -29,20 +29,20 @@
 
         <h1>Configuration</h1>
 
-        <p>Starting with version 0.5 Grml provided a configuration system.  For
-        more details take a look at <a href="grml-autoconfig.1.html">grml-autoconfig.1.html</a>.</p>
+        <p>Starting with version 0.5 Grml provides a configuration system.  Please
+        see <a href="grml-autoconfig.1.html">grml-autoconfig.1.html</a> for details.</p>
 
-       <p>On Grml releases &lt;=2009.05 the documentation is available on the
-       grml ISO via 'man save-config' and <a
+       <p>In Grml releases up to and including 2009.05 the documentation is available on the
+       grml ISO via 'man save-config' and as <a
          href="file:///usr/share/doc/grml-saveconfig/grml-config.html">/usr/share/doc/grml-saveconfig/grml-config.html</a>.</p>
 
-       <p>On Grml releases &gt;2009.05 the documentation is available on the
-       grml-ISO via 'man 1 grml-autoconfig' and <a
+       <p>In Grml releases after 2009.05 the documentation is available on the
+       grml-ISO via 'man 1 grml-autoconfig' and as <a
          href="file:///usr/share/doc/grml-autoconfig/grml-autoconfig.1.html">/usr/share/doc/grml-autoconfig/grml-autoconfig.1.html</a>.</p>
 
        <p><strong>Tip:</strong> Make sure to also check out the new <a
          href="http://wiki.grml.org/doku.php?id=persistency">persistency
-         features</a> on Grml.</p>
+         features</a> of Grml.</p>
 
         <p>Any further wishes, feedback, bug reports? Please <a
         href="/contact/">contact us</a>!</p>