Bunch of grammar fixes and improvements by KORN Andras

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@@ -29,14 +29,14 @@
 
 <h2>About</h2>
 
-<p>This webpage provides <strong>automatically generated snapshots</strong> of
+<p>This page provides <strong>automatically generated snapshots</strong> of
 the <a href="http://grml.org/">Grml Linux Live system</a> which were built
 using <a href="http://grml.org/grml-live/">grml-live</a>. If you don't know
-what's Grml please visit <a href="http://grml.org/faq/">the Grml FAQ</a>.</p>
+what Grml is, please see <a href="http://grml.org/faq/">the Grml FAQ</a>.</p>
 
-<p>WARNING: Feel free to use the ISOs but please notice that they are not
-official <a href="http://grml.org/download/">stable releases</a>. They provide
-the latest changes, but they also might have known issues. In fact, they may not
+<p>WARNING: Feel free to use the ISOs but please note that they are not
+official <a href="http://grml.org/download/">stable releases</a>. They contain
+the latest code, but bugs are also likely. In fact, these snapshots may not
 work at all. So: <strong>PLEASE USE THEM WITH CAUTION!</strong></p>
 
 <p>Please <a href="http://grml.org/bugs/">report any bugs you notice</a>.</p>
@@ -44,12 +44,13 @@ work at all. So: <strong>PLEASE USE THEM WITH CAUTION!</strong></p>
 <h2>Download</h2>
 
 <p>Note: the first link on each line points to the most recent available
-snapshot of the corresponding Grml flavour. The 'sha1'-link points to the according
-sha1 checksum file. The link named 'Older Versions' points to the directory of
-the corresponding Grml flavour providing the current as well as older available
-snapshots.</p>
+snapshot of the corresponding Grml flavour. The linked .sha1 files contain
+the sha1 checksum of the corresponding snapshot.
+The link named 'Older Versions' points to a directory that contains older available snapshots
+of the respective Grml flavour (as well as the latest snapshot).
+</p>
 
-<h3>Debian/testing based Grml-ISOs</h3>
+<h3>Debian testing based Grml images</h3>
 
 <ul>
   <li>grml64_testing (64bit):
@@ -66,7 +67,7 @@ snapshots.</p>
   </li>
 </ul>
 
-<h3>Debian/unstable based Grml-ISOs</h3>
+<h3>Debian unstable based Grml images</h3>
 
 <ul>
   <li>grml64_sid (64bit):
@@ -97,7 +98,7 @@ system within <a href="http://grml.org/grml-live/">grml-live</a>. Place these in
 
 <p>Problems? Questions? <a href="http://grml.org/contact/">Contact us</a>.  But
 please do not forget to provide all the relevant information (especially which
-Grml flavour and version you are refering to).</p>
+Grml flavour and version you are referring to).</p>
 
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