Further release notes updates

[grml.org.git] / changelogs / README-grml-2017.05-rc1 / index.html.tt2

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@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
 
         <h3>About</h3>
 
-        <p>Grml is a Debian based live system focusing on system administrators.
+        <p>Grml is a Debian based live system focusing on the needs of system administrators.
         This Grml release provides fresh software packages from Debian testing (AKA stretch) and is the first Grml release using systemd as its init system.
         As usual it also incorporates up2date hardware support and fixes known bugs from the previous Grml release.</p>
 
@@ -44,13 +44,11 @@
           Please <a href="/bugs/">let us know</a> if you should stumble upon any such issues.</li>
 
           <li>New Grml repository signing key: 4096R/21E0CA38EA2EA4AB.
-          If you're using the Grml repositories (<a href="https://deb.grml.org/">deb.grml.org</a> please make sure to use a current version of the grml-debian-keyring package.
+          If you're using the Grml repositories (<a href="https://deb.grml.org/">deb.grml.org</a>) please make sure to use a current version of the grml-debian-keyring package.
           The GPG key is also available via <a href="https://deb.grml.org/repo-key.gpg">https://deb.grml.org/repo-key.gpg</a>.</li>
 
           <li>Switched from vlock to physlock for console/desktop locking</li>
 
-          <li>Usage of net.ifnames=0 as default boot option</li>
-
         </ul>
 
         <h3>New features</h3>
@@ -96,7 +94,7 @@
 
           </li>
 
-          <li><a href="/zsh/">grml-zshrc</a>:
+          <li><a href="/zsh/">grml-zshrc</a> (Zsh configuration):
 
             <ul>
               <li>Fall back to journalctl with llog + tlog aliases if /var/log/syslog doesn't exist</li>
@@ -113,7 +111,7 @@
 
           </li>
 
-          <li><a href="/grml-debootstrap/">grml-debootstrap</a>:
+          <li><a href="/grml-debootstrap/">grml-debootstrap</a> (wrapper around debootstrap for installing pure Debian):
 
             <ul>
               <li>Support Debian stretch and use Debian stretch as the new default release</li>