Bunch of grammar fixes and improvements by KORN Andras

[grml.org.git] / contact / index.php

diff --git a/contact/index.php b/contact/index.php
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--- a/contact/index.php
+++ b/contact/index.php
@@ -31,51 +31,51 @@
 
        <p>For general questions please join the Grml user mailinglist (see below).</p>
 
-        <p>If you have found a bug please <a href="/bugs/">report that here</a>.</p>
+        <p>If you have found a bug please <a href="/bugs/">report it</a>.</p>
 
-        <p>For commercial support and services please send us a mail
+        <p>For commercial support and services please send us mail
         to business (at) grml.org.</p>
 
         <a name="mailinglist"></a>
         <h2>Mailing lists</h2>
 
-        <p>If you want to be noticed when a <strong>new Grml
-        release</strong> is available subscribe to the
+        <p>If you want to be notified when a <strong>new Grml
+        release</strong> is available, subscribe to the
         read-only <a href="http://ml.grml.org/mailman/listinfo/grml-announce">Grml
-        announce mailinglist</a>.</p>
+        announce mailing list</a>.</p>
 
-        <p>If you want to participate on the <strong>mailinglist of
-        Grml</strong> please subscribe to the <a
+        <p>If you want to participate in the <strong>mailing list of
+        Grml</strong>, please subscribe to the <a
         href="http://ml.grml.org/mailman/listinfo/grml">Grml user
-        mailinglist</a>.  Anyone can post to this mailinglist list, but if you
-        are not already subscribed, your message will be moderated. In this way,
-        we limit the amount of spam entering the message lists.  The Grml user
-        mailinglist is available <a
+        mailing list</a>.  Anyone can post to this mailing list, but if you
+        are not already subscribed, your message will need moderator approval before being posted. This way
+        we limit the amount of spam that makes it to the list.  The Grml user
+        mailing list is available <a
         href="http://dir.gmane.org/gmane.linux.distributions.grml.user">via
         gmane</a> as well.</p>
 
-        <p>If you are interested in following <strong>development of
+        <p>If you are interested in following the <strong>development of
         Grml</strong> you might be interested in the <a
         href="http://ml.grml.org/mailman/listinfo/grml-devel">Grml developer
-        mailinglist</a>. The <a
+        mailing list</a>. The <a
         href="http://ml.grml.org/mailman/listinfo/git-commits">Grml repository
-        commits mailinglist</a> tracks all the pushed commits to <a
+        commits mailing list</a> tracks all the pushed commits to <a
         href="http://git.grml.org/">Grml's git repositories</a>.  Changes in
         Grml's Debian repository can be tracked via the <a
         href="http://ml.grml.org/mailman/listinfo/grml-testing-changes">Grml
-        Testing-changes mailinglist</a>. The <a
+        Testing-changes mailing list</a>. The <a
         href="http://ml.grml.org/mailman/listinfo/bugs-changes">bug-changes</a>
-        mailinglist tracks all messages sent to <a
+        mailing list tracks all messages sent to <a
         href="http://bts.grml.org/">Grml's Bug Tracking System</a>.</p>
 
-        <p><strong>Notice:</strong> All Grml mailinglists are <strong>english
+        <p><strong>Notice:</strong> All Grml mailing lists are <strong>English
         only</strong>.</p>
 
         <a name="irc"></a>
         <h2>IRC</h2>
 
-        <p>You can find us at <a href="irc://irc.freenode.net/grml">#grml on
-        irc.freenode.org</a>. Channel language is english.</p>
+        <p>You can find us in <a href="irc://irc.freenode.net/grml">#grml on
+        irc.freenode.org</a>. Channel language is English.</p>
 
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